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    Red face My First Beat

    So I've been pretty internet deprived as of late with my connection working awfully and just fooling around in Garageband trying to make something decent haha!

    So far I've got the main structure of the song but there's definitely some things I need to modify. This in itself is just a shortened sample/snippet of the whole thing (since its structured like a song, it mostly repeats and it also explains the random ending hehe). I need to really liven up what would be the verses since it does get a bit monotonous...but I will say Im quite pleased with what would be the chorus (especially its build-up ).

    Its nothing amazing, I'll assure you that but for a first attempt I wouldn't say its absolutely foul haha!

    I'd LOVE some feedback if anyone would be willing to give any

    You can stream it right HERE
    - D A V E -






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    Dave, it's really good! You're much better at it than I am, haha. It sounds really mid-90s inspired to me!

    Great job.

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    I like it.
    Good job, Dobby.

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    Aw thanks, both of you <333
    I listened to it again last night with headphones on and I finally managed to hear the bassline

    Again, thanks for the feedback!
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    Shut the f*ck up, that was beautiful!

    Can you do no wrong?

    Name, I need a name for this.

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    Aw thanks, Nico! <3 Really appreciate it

    I haven't been able to name it just yet 'cause I was hoping to polish it up and finish it and then sort of name it afterwards but once I do I'll let you know
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    dude, it sounds good! i was groovin haha.

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    I like it! The only "beef" I have with it is it's too techy-like 80's....but from what I hear, thats coming back, so....maybe that's a good thing!

    Nonetheless-a GREAT job. I could never do that!

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